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Christopher  

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Poem ** slightly edited**

Journal Entry: Sun Dec 18, 2005, 11:17 PM
A Troubled Passing of the Light, Into the Darkness of My Night


standing in a darkened trail,
a pulsing orb hangs thin and frail,
Pulsing crimson, strong and pure,
Pulsing above his sepulcher.
Unawares, is he of this,
passing on in unmatched bliss.
From behind a shadow comes,
Hes fully caught. He cannot run.

There's no escape, from this pain,
From this burning, acid rain.
A crimson orb hangs by string,
hangs by a thread, faltering.
gone is this unfailing strength,
happiness from marrow drained,
A future to this orb denied,
to another the strength applied.

To another's thirst to slake?
yes, to another, a crawling snake.
Sullied himself, in his rut,
To the quick it did One cut.
Tear her to the pulsing core,
yet to the reptile she clings more,
To more important pain, to her,
To darkness this orb deferred.

Now the pit, the orb does find,
to the darkness, not unkind.
a descent that is none too gentle,
To Death's e'er crowded lentil.
This tests its mettle, will it pass?
To the end, will it last?
Maybe, but i wonder if,
happiness will ever find this riff.

This wound is deep, and hardly clean,
Not to be filled by any seen.
God, it hurts, so much to bear,
and it will always linger there.
unforgotten, she'll remain,
This pulsing love fraught with pain,
will never die, though the bearer may,
get his peace in some barren day.


Swallow whole the Dawn, Leviathan,
For soon enough my Night Begins.

Devious Information

  • Current Age: 20, soon to be 21
  • Current Residence: UCF
  • Interests: All
  • Favourite movie: is it cool? yes that one.
  • Favourite band or musician: uh, right now its Dragon Force.
  • Favourite genre of music: Rock,
  • Favourite artist: mrow?
  • Favourite poet or writer: mrow??
  • Favourite photographer: mrow???
  • Favourite style of art: i like darker styles, and clean lines, and clear movement.
  • MP3 player of choice: my car.
  • Shell of choice: shiny
  • Favourite game: Gears of War
  • Favourite gaming platform: Xbox 360, Wii, PS2
  • Favourite cartoon character: GIR
  • Personal Quote: Can your heart break after its stopped beating?
  • Tools of the Trade: PEN>>>>PENCIL

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~galadriel0mirror:icongaladriel0mirror: Nov 21, 2006, 11:19:48 AM
Thanks for the favorites!!

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"I form the light, and create darkness: I make peace, and create evil: I the LORD do all these things."- Isaiah 45:7
~cristianomotta:iconcristianomotta: Nov 9, 2006, 3:06:34 AM
Thanks for the favorite!

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~heathermay110:iconheathermay110: Oct 18, 2006, 9:53:23 PM
Thank you for the comment on my "Glow from within"
I was actually very content at the moment. I achieved 6hrs of caving (hense the glow effect)
~Ticatiquita:iconTicatiquita: Sep 20, 2006, 8:44:57 AM Mood: Joy
Hi, sorry but i made a mistake, today i review my DA account, but is still some links i don't use very often, soo, i found a message from u from October of 2005, that message was a answer to a message i leave to you in september of 2005, but it was about adding people to a list, because as i was telling you before, i dont use a lot of links in this DA, sorry it was my mistake...a hug...and sorry for the late answer...Tica

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~cristianomotta:iconcristianomotta: Jul 25, 2006, 11:15:16 AM
Thanks for the fav!

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~weisen1:iconweisen1: Jun 13, 2006, 4:14:11 AM
thanks for the fave! :heart:
it really made my day, now i start the day happy

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*Violator3:iconViolator3: Jun 2, 2006, 11:30:13 AM
Thanks for the :+fav: on The Sweetest Condition :heart:

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=danzr4ever:icondanzr4ever: Mar 4, 2006, 3:35:49 PM
Thanks for the +fav! :hug:

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=inception8:iconinception8: Mar 4, 2006, 12:17:44 AM
thanks very much for the faves :)

take care
~can-you-see-me:iconcan-you-see-me: Feb 17, 2006, 9:27:28 AM
hmm...because i do this on my page, i am taking the liberty to do it on your page as well.

YOU HAVE 200 PAGE VIEWS!!!!!

a new hundred. excitement, courtesy of me.

::grin::

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~can-you-see-me:iconcan-you-see-me: Feb 8, 2006, 1:53:45 PM
hehe gosh, thank you!!!! that makes me a happy girl.

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"I'll teach you how to jump on the wind's back, and then away we go..You just think lovely wonderful thoughts, and they lift you up in the air."
~dragonalighted:icondragonalighted: Feb 7, 2006, 9:53:19 PM
well, gosh, therei posted one. ^^ sowwies i took so long.

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~can-you-see-me:iconcan-you-see-me: Jan 15, 2006, 4:57:56 PM
hey you, you promised you would write more and that it would be happy..im not seeing any new poetry christopher!!

xo

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"I'll teach you how to jump on the wind's back, and then away we go..You just think lovely wonderful thoughts, and they lift you up in the air."


Death by teacup....most definitely the way to go...


sucks to your ass-mar
~skin242:iconskin242: Jan 15, 2006, 11:47:20 AM
many thanks for the fav on aquarium :wave:
~Aura-Alora:iconAura-Alora: Jan 14, 2006, 11:32:38 AM
Hello random person I found :wave:
~can-you-see-me:iconcan-you-see-me: Jan 13, 2006, 1:24:49 PM
so i think that we need to find you an inspiration mmk? because im telling you, the ryhmey poetry, fucking awesome and i miss it. so...

xo

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"I'll teach you how to jump on the wind's back, and then away we go..You just think lovely wonderful thoughts, and they lift you up in the air."


Death by teacup....most definitely the way to go...


sucks to your ass-mar
~ericros:iconericros: Dec 20, 2005, 5:52:11 PM
:wave:
thanks for :+fav: , Chris !
:hug:
~liquidd-1:iconliquidd-1: Dec 15, 2005, 11:22:32 PM
Thanks for the :+fav: on Deliverance [link]
:thanks: Glad you enjoyed it!

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^arachnid15:iconarachnid15: Nov 30, 2005, 3:29:48 PM
:please:

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~Kylamay:iconKylamay: Nov 27, 2005, 8:43:40 PM
Thanks for the fav! ^^ You have a nice gallery.

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~Nikkinox:iconNikkinox: Nov 21, 2005, 10:25:43 PM
thanx! ;) for the fav.

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`GoblinQueeen:iconGoblinQueeen: Nov 11, 2005, 7:47:48 PM
Thanks so very much for the favs :aww:

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~sketcherjak:iconsketcherjak: Nov 2, 2005, 6:19:39 AM
thanks for stoppin' by and favin'
~sipsis:iconsipsis: Nov 1, 2005, 1:15:41 AM
Thank you very much for the visit and the fav
Christos